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Croix

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poetry garden
« on: February 03, 2008, 11:05:34 AM »

so, since there are no special thread for poems in English , I'm making one. so, pleaaasee post all your poems here!! short and long, romantic an dramatic, love and hatred, just put it all up!! we would love to read it, and i will try to give comment regularly. thank you!!

i'll post mine first.


THE LULLABY OF EXILE

Out across the brute land
hard by the hills
Autumn deepens,
the wind blows.
The wind blows
snow in the grey air,
in the hollow space of words,
that bony place,
where the men hold out,
some by sleep,
some by death,
some by breath.



 
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Re: poetry garden
« Reply #1 on: February 27, 2008, 09:45:09 AM »

it is same with love words thred?
o.o

Then i post mine ^^

Your Name

I wrote your name in the sky,
but the wind blew it away.
I wrote your name in the sand,
but the waves washed it away.
I wrote your name in my heart,
and forever it will stay.
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Re: poetry garden
« Reply #2 on: February 27, 2008, 10:04:01 AM »

i'll try sum'....

sadness is mine
ma' m8 is nite

i want to fly
till get high
though ma' shadow always betrays

still i pray
with no lie

when i die
will one cry
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Re: poetry garden
« Reply #3 on: March 18, 2008, 01:53:25 PM »

Okay, the topic of my poem is Internet...

Prepare yourself

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You and I in the Internet..

If I was google,
         then
         when someone search on me,
                      the search results are the web pages where your name exist

If I was rapidshare,
         then
         when someone wants to upload/download from me,
                      the files will contains the memory of us together

If I was gmail,
         then
         when someone register new account on me,
                      he/she must be invited by you

If I was friendster,
         then
         when someone put a testimonial on me,
                     you must confirm it first

If I was facebook,
         then
         when someone register in it,
                     he/she must be your good friend first

If I was amazon.com
         then
         when someone wants to buy a book,
                     you will define the price


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I think and type it..no preparation at all..
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Re: poetry garden
« Reply #4 on: March 18, 2008, 08:34:11 PM »

@Roses:
gubraks.... ;D wahahaha ;D
what a weird poem :)
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Re: poetry garden
« Reply #5 on: March 19, 2008, 08:25:04 AM »

That one is just for fun.
Want to see the real my poem...
watch this...
ups..maybe read this....

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Cave of Loneliness

Crawling back my way…
Entering my abandoned cave
Taking this bleeding heart
Sleeping till its final beat

No one can hurt me anymore

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Re: poetry garden
« Reply #6 on: March 19, 2008, 08:54:31 AM »

I live in the cave of darkness
there's a hell below me
above me no heaven
frankenstein was scared of me
my pee is H2SO4
i can walk without wings
i can fly without feet
lucifer adores me in everyway
i'm shiver on your lips
i'm tremble on your feet
i'm tsunami in the shore
the only thing u want to forget

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Re: poetry garden
« Reply #7 on: March 19, 2008, 08:54:37 AM »

I live in the cave of darkness
there's a hell below me
above me no heaven
frankenstein was scared of me
my pee is H2SO4
i can walk without wings
i can fly without feet
lucifer adores me in everyway
i'm shiver on your lips
i'm tremble on your feet
i'm tsunami in the shore
the only thing u want to forget

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Re: poetry garden
« Reply #8 on: March 19, 2008, 09:01:44 AM »

I live in the cave of darkness
there's a hell below me
above me no heaven
frankenstein was scared of me
my pee is H2SO4
i can walk without wings
i can fly without feet

lucifer adores me in everyway
i'm shiver on your lips
i'm tremble on your feet
i'm tsunami in the shore
the only thing u want to forget



how can? *gimana ceritanya I mean  :-[
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Re: poetry garden
« Reply #9 on: March 19, 2008, 09:10:16 AM »


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The only thing I want to forget

...is the caresses of you...

The way you hold my hand so well..
The way they stared on our holding hands
"They are jealous of us", I smile
And so grateful, it made me feel
That you waited me for real

But it was...

Now you are gone...
Leaving me with alone with my empty shell
Caught up in the snow storm, right in the middle
They say the snowflake is beautiful
But not when you are not here with me at all

Cave...my lonely cave...
will be the last salvation of mine
Until the day you come
and I will awake

by the caresses of you


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I tried to make the rhythm at the end of the line
How about it...I've got the idea from you..
And just "brainstorming" it out...
Frankly speaking, I am thinking about someone right now... ;)
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